Talk on disciplining children

I'm speaking next week to a group of moms about disciplining children. Here's a quick preview of what I think I'll talk about.

1. The purpose of discipline (discipleship)
2. Keys of God's discipline model (Grace and Truth)
3. Tactical discipline
• Plan toward a goal rather than react
• Focus on purpose not facts
• Teach love through obedience not because I say so
• Demonstrate joy not emotionless responsibility
• Guide to life-long meaning not just how to be a good kid

What do you think? Is it practical enough? Will it give young moms more than they already have?